This was a useless chapter with nothing to differentiate form any other story. Rape, violence, and humiliation all have their place in a story and can be used to further the development of a particular character or to move a story along in a certain direction, however gratuitous violence/rape/torture/slavery/humiliation simply because you can shows, IMO, a serious lack of creativity and is a major turn off 1/10 – THX
Fix’m«1» This was a useless chapter with nothing to differentiate form any other story. Pornhat This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong.
