it was kind of unsatisfying because you had a relativley long intro but a short sex scene. if you put more time into it, your stories could be good.«1» Describe the characters more, and put more detail into the sex. XXX it was kind of unsatisfying because you had a relativley long intro but a short sex scene. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-29 18:46:44once again we get left hanging by a wannabe hack that can’t finish a simple story WHAT A WASTE OF TIME.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-27 05:03:30Great story loved the detailanonymous readerReport 2011-07-29 13:28:14if this is your first ORIGINAL story does that mean the other one is STOLEN?Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 04:22:33You need to be more descriptive. if you put more time into it, your stories could be good.«1»
