And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. Sex video The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. That’s just disgusting. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. That’s just disgusting. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it.
