Wish you would Finnish!Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-11 07:41:52I read this and came like 20 timesAnonymous readerReport 2015-09-05 08:14:44You need to revise the first couple of chapters. . XXX . … . . … Ty for writing.«12345» It’d be nice to do a proof read/edit suggestion for your stories. Might I suggest paragraphs? . . … . . … Might I suggest paragraphs? 394 comments«12345»thejohnnyrottenReport 2015-12-09 01:50:51Great start. . . … Wish you would Finnish!Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-11 07:41:52I read this and came like 20 timesAnonymous readerReport 2015-09-05 08:14:44You need to revise the first couple of chapters. It’s hard to read without them.Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-21 08:09:52This is the best fucking story I have read on this site and I have read a lot of them so go you this deserves 100%Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-23 08:37:52Great!
