It show it was ur first time writing a story…anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 10:04:38I hate when ppl criticize the fucking spelling. Pornhat please say yes.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-20 00:45:17Everything happens too fast! 24 comments«12345»ErectskippyReport 2015-10-16 23:23:26Good story, it could be longer, but hot just the same. as for spelling and grammar, you can undersand it,you can get through it, so dont bother him with it they were few and far between, so i suggest no more giving him shit, cuz if you didnt understand that, then you’re just stupid and tarded. My Buddy Josh wore Boxer Briefs they cupped his butt showing his round assets, the mound in the front let me see he was circumsized his dick head clearly visible…stretch it out, a good story gives me a Boner a Great Story is long enough
