I did do differenty paragraphs, but didnt think to put an express space between each of them. Xxx video I did do differenty paragraphs, but didnt think to put an express space between each of them. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. also sentences end with a period not a comma. not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. Thanks for the advce, check back with me in the future, I’ll put it to good use.READERReport 2006-06-16
