You do a decent job right up until the sex portions where detail goes out the window and reality takes a back seat to lunacy. I had to stop reading at the first sex sequence because the characters were too poorly written.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-06 00:59:07Did that man take some. XXX like itAnonymous readerReport 2015-02-07 06:40:14This wasn’t particularly strong work, especially compared to others here. Hell they don’t need
it. VERY WELL DONE«12345» The key here, is to put *people* in these situations, not robotic facsimile of people. VERY WELL DONE«12345» like itAnonymous readerReport 2015-02-07 06:40:14This wasn’t particularly strong work, especially compared to others here. Will there be more of Alan’s escapades at the lake??Anonymous readerReport 2016-03-06 14:02:57well told a lot of hot action.it keeps it up.Anna RoseReport 2015-02-19 02:46:01Nice! Hell they don’t need
it.
