Find someone you trust to help you with how to lay out your paragraphs, and the prospective view of ”him, her, their, ours, we, etc. I’d really hate to see this story end before it had a chance to be a really good story. Pornhat Seriously the only reason it’s gettin’ such low rating marks, is it’s so totally screwed up grammar wise.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-15 10:05:28Your writing sucks. I go along with all the other people that are not happy with your grammar. Find someone you trust to help you with how to lay out your paragraphs, and the prospective view of ”him, her, their, ours, we, etc.
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