All of your comments are my big thing, thank you again.hornyelkReport 2011-03-10 19:05:57I liked the changing viewpoints, which at first were a bit unclear. I don’t think it took away from the story. Free porn lol
horny-I think maintaining a rotation through the characters is a good idea and ID’ing each POV change would probabily been the biggest improvement. Don’t much want the the stroker’s votes. Don’t know about continuing. OHT- Thanks for the support, it’s always appreciated but I thought even the least tactful had something to say worth thinking about. CijaonehandedtypistReport 2011-03-07 16:35:46Fuck the complainers ssalo. history? The breaks with ID could help, maintain the rotation through the characters.
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