but as much as id hate to admit it. love rape and bestialityAnonymous readerReport 2009-12-05 04:30:54good plot, but work on your formatting. Porn video Maybe try typing story into microsoft word then compy and paste.Anonymous readerReport 2009-12-04 01:46:48poorly written, and completely unbelievable. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 02:12:03Other than such comments mentioned I think you need to work on character design, ok we get it the girl is goth and she is wearing a nice dress, what does she look like? passable. Also if you plan on doing more beastiality I would like to note that a dogs knot takes about ten minutes to soften before it can be taken out even if it in a girls ass. but as much as id hate to admit it. What did the dress look like?
