Learn to use paragraphs! Pornhat As a suggestion. So i can’t say if it was any good.«1» If you write another one then let us know beforehand & we can book our coffins with the undertaker and read the story from inside, then with loss of breath they can stick the lid on!READERReport 2007-06-29 11:31:20hmm.. Finally SPELL CHECK. Why don’t you ask someone to edit your story for you.. Why don’t you ask someone to edit your story for you.. Also had problem breathing between paragraphs! Also had problem breathing between paragraphs! how to put it into your language.. Howvever, on a plus note, you do have an easy to read writing manner, that IF you formed into paras and spell checked and used the correct tense would probably manke a very
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