go write the second part, I am dying to read about the two girls in the hotel roomdosukinuta03Report 2012-06-12 23:38:22seriously, what the fuck was that shit?«12» sweet but tangy” basicly, use all your scenses. Porn Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? When does this story take place? Doing so adds to the atmosphere, adds background and detail that makes a story interesting and not just a clinical description of some random people having sex.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 04:55:08not a bad story. Who are the characters? Keep those in mind when writing a story too. And why are they attracted to each other. first, some background. first, some background.
