dont just rush to the sex scene. take some time and build up. Pornhat You need to slow down, alot! You could do well with this but more detail! take some time and build up. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2007-05-21 02:35:21no eroticaREADERReport 2007-05-21 01:52:10Alright, we need to have a talk. also spell check is there for a reasonREADERReport 2007-05-20 17:29:58Actually two of the people that complained of spelling errors misspelt a word. slow down. 3. dont just rush to the sex scene. if we all wanted to blow out loads fast we would jerk off/finger bang our selfs to pictures. 3. (our selfs) But they weren’t writing a story now were they?READERReport 2007-05-20 09:23:27Shall I point out the irony of the reader who commented on the spelling, yet spelt “potential” incorrectly?READERReport 2007-05-19 15:42:513reasons why this sucked
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