Detail matters. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. Sex video And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. It was a little short & didn’t have much detail but all around a great story. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. There was no flow to the story. You should definitely make a part two. Detail matters. There was no flow to the story. Detail matters. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story.
