Poor grammar and punctuation, loads of sentence fragments and a completely unrealistic scenario. ready for part 2!!«1» Poor grammar and punctuation, loads of sentence fragments and a completely unrealistic scenario. Porn video He takes off his shorts and underwear at the water fountain, but then coach orders him to strip or he’ll do it himself. Has great potential and i like the whole “kidnapping/ obsession” theme, can’t wait for the next chapter, please post it soon, thx :)palmer69Report 2012-11-24 16:45:36Great story, hope he brings some of those little league players that he coaches home as well.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-23 18:49:17I’m confused. He takes off his shorts and underwear at the water fountain, but then coach orders him to strip or he’ll do it himself.
