You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. Porn You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you.
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