Not only were there spelling mistakes and grammar errors, the story lacked substance. Pornhat It was not a good story and the writer needs to do a lot more practicing before resubmitting if he ever wants to be a good writer.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-18 12:30:47good story made me rock hard the same thing sort of happend to meMuckerReport 2010-12-17 14:45:34Good story but it could benefit from proof reading and spell check. It was not a good story and the writer needs to do a lot more practicing before resubmitting if he ever wants to be a good writer.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-18 12:30:47good story made me rock hard the same thing sort of happend to meMuckerReport 2010-12-17 14:45:34Good story but it could benefit from proof reading and spell check.
