You definitely need an editor as well because your punctuation is truly in need of work!! I’m not saying give up, but you really need a lot of work if your going to produce quality literature.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:05:20Mistakes yes ! Pornhat You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. You definitely need an editor as well because your punctuation is truly in need of work!! 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good.
