you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. its better than the first! XXX watch the grammar, particularly your tenses. pick one!! you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. You need to watch your tences… 11 comments«123»IntriguedReport 2008-08-12 01:19:51So when is part three coming out? I also liked the end where you fing out Jill has a boyfriend. you go from past to present back to past..
