The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself. XXX Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? This is a story worth telling, and there are lots of interesting parts to it. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. But, you are a very talented writer. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. But, you are a very talented writer. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. Just need more practice,
